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Beauty & Peace

All that you tell, all that you sell,
doesn’t make my hair look well.
I always do things ‘the Natural Way’,
obviously the way that saves my day.
Home made shikakai is mom’s special,
her special indeed fills my tiny vessel.
Now that I’m in foreign land,
I miss mom’s favourite.
Went in search of a real substitute,
in the land of no shikakai.
At last found the perfect alternative,
that is so reliable as mom’s hair care tips.
I see mom’s ever handy miracle,
in this far off land of modernity .
It’s called the ‘Dove’ here –
Truly the bird that spreads peace,
adds beauty to my hair now.
thank God I’m not lost in this strange land.

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16 responses

  1. What is this man…?It seems like Dove advertisement. rhyming scheme is there… good

    October 20, 2011 at 5:14 pm

  2. So whats the result…………? Well its good :-)!!!!!

    October 20, 2011 at 5:16 pm

  3. Beautiful poem. Good Luck!!!

    October 20, 2011 at 5:25 pm

  4. All the Best !

    October 21, 2011 at 5:07 am

  5. sub

    sweet….all the best 🙂

    October 21, 2011 at 3:39 pm

  6. nicely written………………………………………………

    October 22, 2011 at 10:34 am

  7. jananny

    nice n enjoyable…

    October 23, 2011 at 7:34 am

  8. good luck dude !
    Awesome !

    October 23, 2011 at 1:37 pm

  9. beautiful poem. All the best

    October 23, 2011 at 1:47 pm

  10. Creative and lovely!

    October 25, 2011 at 8:40 am

  11. “…Home made shikakai is mom’s special,
    her special indeed fills my tiny vessel….” – undoubtedly the best two lines! 🙂

    A.

    October 30, 2011 at 1:03 pm

  12. poetry par excellence, beauty of words very prominent in rhyming.
    best wishes.

    November 2, 2011 at 3:22 am

  13. megha

    lovely n sweet poem 🙂

    all d best!

    check out mine at
    http://www.indiblogger.in/indipost.php?post=88311#.Tq7V06wrBO0.facebook
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    shop n njoy 😀

    November 3, 2011 at 7:44 pm

  14. Nice start “All that you tell, all that you sell, doesn’t make my hair look well.” Your missing your mother brought out beautifully. I enjoyed it thoroughly.

    November 9, 2011 at 5:31 am

  15. awwww.. i love the mom lines!

    November 15, 2011 at 6:46 am

  16. 🙂

    December 11, 2011 at 2:54 pm

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